Just Prey

Artist E.b. Fromkes Www.erinfromkes.com

“You have good veins” my doctor says in the way you might tell someone she is witty, a skilled scuba diver, or queen of Scrabble. The sandpaper scratch of his genuinity, coupled with an aura of unadulterated compassion wafts over me. In my supine stupor of befuddled surrender, bulbous pathways of blood springing erect cackle with irony. Somebody else may interpret the vivacious webs of green spidering down my arm amidst a pasty palette of poison to be some kind of symbol. Somebody else may cling to a symbolic omen of tenacity, of the determination that even my blood sustains again and again, poke after poke. But that somebody was about two decades, three armies of doctors, swaths of yellowing files worth of erroneous diagnoses and one very different woman-child ago.

Despite all this I take the compliment. I take the words in, willing them to buoy me against the sinking capitulation anchoring me. Whatever prowess they may wield, though, is ethereal and any remnants of a life raft sift away under the muted lighting above. The cognizant crafting of this room as a cozy counterpart to mainstream IV rooms dawns on me. But it does not penetrate.

Because my everything, each smitherine crammed into the cookie cutter outline of a woman’s perimeter I occupy, is hunted. I belong to an endangered species poached relentlessly. Like a cub cornered by a cadre of killers, I lie belly up, heart racing, paws waving smoke signals to the drifting clouds beyond. Nothing, not the hazel twinkle of my tiger eyes nor the heaving determination of my adrenaline sparking like acid along my spine, infuse doubt into my predators. And so the swish of my tail stills, the tufts peaking my ears resign, and my paws wide with promise of promise, sink to my sides.

I am on the bulls-eye of an easy target. Inperceptible goons have infiltrated my person deep into my bones. Like sardines squished against a tin, I swell past the confines of myself, lulling in a noxious marinade of all that should never been. All that should not be, but is. Upon a table sheathed in cream cotton I lie, exhausted into oblivion by a survival instinct gone haywire, even my fatigue titters with doom. Beneath the palpating tips of fingers my doctor selects a vein. Left? Middle? Right? They are all supple; seemingly ripe for fortification.

Out from under the gleam of the needle my vein relinquishes. My blood huddles collapsing in on itself, toward my core. And we all fall down.


3 thoughts on “Just Prey

  1. I find beautiful poetry in the flow of blood, your writing illustrates it well. Having had cancer for a good percentage of my life (leukemia – but now lung cancer), there is this dichotomy that has never been lost on me, where the blood that flows through my veins, sustaining life, is also trying to end it. It’s a stark realization of how fragile life can be when your own body creates the weapon used to kill you. This was lovely. Thank you for writing.

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    1. Thank you for your thoughtful commentary. I have been ill as well for the majority of my life, giving me ample time to overthink the dichotomous juxtaposition of life and death. Although I am devastated that you too are ill, it is nice to know I’m not alone.

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